Foolish Girl Like Me

This is a song I wrote a while ago. I would REALLY like some feedback!

Foolish Girl like Me

Oh what a surprise, I messed up again.

I don’t understand how you could have died for a foolish girl like me.

It never seems to fail; I always fall right after you’ve picked me up.

Why can I never get it right?

Only you can save me. You’re the only one I need

Rescue you me

From my selfish heart.

Rescue me

From my own will.

Rescue me

O, Lord.

Why do you even take your time trying to teach a girl who only hurts you?

Why do you even try to set me on the right path, when you know I’ll turn away?

I don’t see how you could love me so much that you would die, for a girl who sits upon her heart’s throne.

Why do you love me so, when you and I both know I’ll disappoint you again?

Rescue you me

From my selfish heart.

Rescue me

From my own will.

Rescue me

O, Lord.

Bridge

I want to Live for you

I want to love for you

I want to show you to the world,

So Rescue Me,

Rescue me from me

I want to Live for you

I want to love for you

I want to show you to the world,

So Rescue Me,

Rescue me from me

Rescue you me

From my selfish heart.

Rescue me

From my own will.

Rescue me

O, Lord.

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